Creative Writing Portfolio Submission...give me feedback please.. 4 school...
at Mine in California at 09:09AM
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jfreeborn7:
That is pretty good latricia- it's deep- I didn't know you could be deep....muuuaahhhhhh lol!!
at 09:31AM 12/05/08
at 09:31AM 12/05/08
latricia:
funny funny sassy cow! I have to put together my best pieces for my final portfolio and I want to know which are my best-est... i figured my friends would be honest...hmmm
at 09:33AM 12/05/08
at 09:33AM 12/05/08
latricia:
What do you think? Im nervous because my classmates will be critiquing my work!
at 09:42AM 12/05/08
at 09:42AM 12/05/08
cpotillor:
This is very good chicken lips! Please hold while I read the other one...
at 09:47AM 12/05/08
at 09:47AM 12/05/08
latricia:
I was trying to emphasize your spread headedness... hahaha! No my computer was acting all silly n stuff... :P
at 09:57AM 12/05/08
at 09:57AM 12/05/08
latricia:
Well, in this specific piece my purpose is to get the reader to ponder on their own life. So I created it that way.. Is it too slow?
at 10:03AM 12/05/08
at 10:03AM 12/05/08
latricia:
Yeah I know, but I hope the reader can grasp what Im saying...especially for people with caffeine ADD!! hahahaha
at 10:08AM 12/05/08
at 10:08AM 12/05/08
perlapearls:
Thats deep T...We seem to be on the same page..I've been thinking about..who we are..Once we really grasp that, and find who we are in Christ then everything will fall into place its rightful place.You wont need to find yourself in others..You wont suffer as much disappointment or hurt..You will allow God to be your everything and by that you will be complete..You will be able to be in a place where you know noone at all.But be comfotable because you know that God loves you and it doesn't matter what anybody else thinks..Just what he thinks..The Holy Spirit then will be more real to you...Then anyother..Thats what I have been stewin on..Great Job?
at 10:39AM 12/05/08
at 10:39AM 12/05/08
latricia:
Amen sister! See, this made you ponder huh? Even if its pondering on what you were already pondering on... hahahah!
at 10:40AM 12/05/08
at 10:40AM 12/05/08
surrenda:
Babe this poem is really good and very thought provoking... I love when I can read a poem that gets one to think from different angles...
at 05:55PM 12/05/08
at 05:55PM 12/05/08
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Creative Writing Portfolio Submission...give me feedback please.. 4 school...
at Mine in California at 09:09AM
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