Creative Writing Portfolio Submission...give me feedback please.. 4 school...
at Mine in California at 09:09AM
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jfreeborn7:
That is pretty good latricia- it's deep- I didn't know you could be deep....muuuaahhhhhh lol!!
at 09:31AM 12/05/08
at 09:31AM 12/05/08
latricia:
funny funny sassy cow! I have to put together my best pieces for my final portfolio and I want to know which are my best-est... i figured my friends would be honest...hmmm
at 09:33AM 12/05/08
at 09:33AM 12/05/08
latricia:
What do you think? Im nervous because my classmates will be critiquing my work!
at 09:42AM 12/05/08
at 09:42AM 12/05/08
cpotillor:
This is very good chicken lips! Please hold while I read the other one...
at 09:47AM 12/05/08
at 09:47AM 12/05/08
latricia:
I was trying to emphasize your spread headedness... hahaha! No my computer was acting all silly n stuff... :P
at 09:57AM 12/05/08
at 09:57AM 12/05/08
latricia:
Well, in this specific piece my purpose is to get the reader to ponder on their own life. So I created it that way.. Is it too slow?
at 10:03AM 12/05/08
at 10:03AM 12/05/08
latricia:
Yeah I know, but I hope the reader can grasp what Im saying...especially for people with caffeine ADD!! hahahaha
at 10:08AM 12/05/08
at 10:08AM 12/05/08
latricia:
Amen sister! See, this made you ponder huh? Even if its pondering on what you were already pondering on... hahahah!
at 10:40AM 12/05/08
at 10:40AM 12/05/08
surrenda:
Babe this poem is really good and very thought provoking... I love when I can read a poem that gets one to think from different angles...
at 05:55PM 12/05/08
at 05:55PM 12/05/08
Creative Writing Portfolio Submission...give me feedback please.. 4 school...
at Mine in California at 09:09AM
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