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Jessica
jfreeborn7: My personal preference, I like the first one better- this one is really good too- That is a hard decision

at 09:39AM 12/05/08

Latricia
latricia: Im submitting both... i need 3-5 good pieces to turn in.

at 09:42AM 12/05/08

Latricia
latricia: Im submitting both... i need 3-5 good pieces to turn in.

at 09:43AM 12/05/08

Cemanthia
cpotillor: This one is very good too. I like this one because it makes forgiveness tangible.

at 09:51AM 12/05/08

Amanda
sinyarda: Good stuff:)

at 09:54AM 12/05/08

Latricia
latricia: Thanks this type of poem is called a Sestina... ;) where you use the same last words to create new stanzas..

at 09:56AM 12/05/08

Latricia
latricia: Thanks guys!!!
OOooh thanks for the idea Jess, I might do that!! I need another poem too!


at 09:56AM 12/05/08

Latricia
latricia: I have another more personal piece but I dont know if I should submit it. I need one more poem...

at 10:04AM 12/05/08

Latricia
latricia: Im scared, I just wrote it today and Im not sure if it sounds right yet... But I will put it up here...

at 10:08AM 12/05/08

Jenn
jennaliyah: like this one too...

at 10:13AM 12/05/08

Latricia
latricia: check it again, i had to redo it cuz the font was too little...

at 10:34AM 12/05/08

PERLAPEARLS
perlapearls: its kinda hard to read..I like to ponder on the words..But I felt rain pouring down.Like the first day of rain when we needed it so much.The smell is tasteful and refreshing.

at 11:07AM 12/05/08

Latricia
latricia: Oh I didnt realize the fuzzies until now...sorry

at 11:12AM 12/05/08

Latricia
latricia: trina i thought u were inboxing me

at 11:12AM 12/05/08

PERLAPEARLS
perlapearls: I did.U dnt get it?Let me check..

at 11:13AM 12/05/08

Latricia
latricia: Forgiven..thats funny...
Trina, I got it, sorry!


at 11:18AM 12/05/08

Surrenda
surrenda: Dang babe I really like this one too...

at 05:48PM 12/05/08

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at Mine in California at 09:35AM

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