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openjoe: Nobody curious about the story I started writing?

at 07:40PM 01/10/09

openjoe: Here it is if anyone wants to have a look:
http://www.josephperry.net/notes/barren-heath-chapter-one-part-one/

at 07:46PM 01/10/09

jpo: Funny, I read it but didn't know what it was so made no comment. My favorite phrase is "he quit the room". I love that verbage.

at 07:57PM 01/10/09

whomheloves: I'll check it out Joe =)

at 11:27AM 01/11/09

jaypo: I like it Joe. I read both chapters and enjoyed it. To one it is Rose Hill and the other Barren Heath. Interesting.

at 07:54PM 01/17/09

openjoe: Thanks Jay. I'm fighting myself to stay with it and keep going. I have a pattern of starting things without finishing so your encouragement is good.

at 08:01PM 01/17/09

jaypo: i think one thing that might pull someone in further is character development. you do get a sense of who the person is by the reading. however some character development helps the reader to engage into the story. just a thought.

at 08:11PM 01/17/09

openjoe: I hear you. I'm gonna have to do some filling out and filling in.

at 08:16PM 01/17/09

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